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Well, Since the Server is Down... (CONTEST)

K

Kuznetzvov

Wanderer
Re: Well, Since the Server is Down... (CONTEST)

I wrote this back in highschool... Some people seem to like it. The symbolism is related to a special form of deviant sexual behavior that I enjoy. See if you can figure it out :)

Candy and Fire

Raining candy from open skies,
A fire burns within the eyes,
Sharp as gems, full of lust,
Green as grass, red as rust,
Of past desires left unfulfilled,
Of one mind so strong willed,
That craves the candy with burning eyes,
Candy falling from open skies.

Until at last, the dream is real,
A single moment so surreal.
The burning eyes will have their water,
The burning eyes, burning hotter,
Falling on the trickling candy,
Bright like stars, sweet as brandy.

Succor and warmth overwhelm,
Fire hotter than a thousand hells.
Time becomes timeless.
Thought becomes thoughtless.

The burning stops,
As wind carries way,
Eyes still hot,
Candy falling for another day.
Faded into forever,
The flowing warmth is gone,
But not gone forever,
Only until tomorrow gone.

[end]
 
The Scat Man

The Scat Man

Knight
Re: Well, Since the Server is Down... (CONTEST)

well you certianly fooled me with the red rust imagery and the burning fire...perhaps more literal as in something massochistic?
 
The Scat Man

The Scat Man

Knight
Re: Well, Since the Server is Down... (CONTEST)

i dont knwo if you can get more literal....something to do with fire or red hot pokers or branding?
 
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